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This is great. So many interesting pictures. Robotic yet squirmy and fleshy... I like this. It feels like the future.

this is pretty awesome. has a very organic emotional flow, if that makes any sense. great work!

shame on you for using dickinson, too.

I like this as you can feel the emotion really well- however this just seems to be a random poem with no many ideas expanded upon. If you expanded upon ...

Poetry is not having every couple of words spaced like this. In fact this is annoying to read and there's really no poetry involved. No, seriously, line breaks are not ...

How could she laugh if her throat was cut? Never mind. Forget I asked. This seemed more like a Cannibal Corpse song than an emo poem. Sickening to read, but ...

this reads amazing and true. you deserve a hundred comments. i love sylvia woolf :)

aw, you guys are nice :)

why do people look for "order" in poetry? it boggles the mind. like others have said, the flow is beautiful. i didn't find the content thrilling, but when the words ...

you have a refreshing perspective on these things. our young celebrity obsession has reached depressing heights.

thanks for the comments. snoink, not sure what i can say about your comment except i think "emo" is an insulting and poorly defined label. i appreciate your words, though. ...

do you have a link to that website?

interesting. cinematic. the first part with him in the shower was quite cronenbergian. not sure i can offer much more input at this point, but it's a good start.

thank you for the kind words.

pretty cute, entertaining, etc. as far as dog stories go, but the shift in tone at the end struck me as somewhat abrupt.